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Post by Hades. on Sept 25, 2006 18:20:16 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Her name is Darkness. That's what she posseses. A very, naive young vampire whom wonders on the street searching for something she doesn't know. She is a not so tall, pale skin, eyes like the colors of fire mixed with drops of blood, very slim, taintive body, sexy but, innocent 18-year-old girl. Her hair is as black as the night and her soul as dark as her name, yet as innocent and beautiful as a rose. She grew up in an unknown place where they treated her like the foulest creature among this earth. She posseses the power of her name but, she was so innocent that she didn't even knew what was happening to her. She couldn't hel herself everytime she got angry. That was one of the reasons why they locked her and send her away to an unknown planet so that nobody back there could see but, maybe feel. She became a mutant, gaining a strange taste for blood. Human blood. Everytime her body desired to drain other peoples live, her yes turned crystal blue.
She had nowhere to go but, sheslept in the tall, dark depths of a tower behind a gargoyle. Everytime in her sleep, she dreamt of the same dreadful dream that haunted her mind since an infant. She was walking towards a door and it flew open, there stood her mum. . .pale, frozen and blood drripped from her mouth. Her dad was on her feet, sobbing and holding her in his arms. . . His eyes were as red as blood. Then something strange people came and pulled put a very long, sharp object Darkness didn't recognized. The guy who had the big, sharp object thrusted in her father's stomach and pulled it back to find it smuthered in blood. Darkness eyes turned as dark as the night and suddenly the soldier fell on the ground and Darkness eyes returned to normal not even knowing what she did. Panicking and trembling, Darkness woke up to find she was only dreaming. "It was just a dream. . ."
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Post by Kitten Kat on Sept 25, 2006 20:06:00 GMT -5
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Post by Hades. on Sept 26, 2006 17:03:13 GMT -5
Sure! Heres more. . .
Chapter 2
She's a very lonely little girl. One day she was sleeping on only just one piece of paper on the cold, wet ground. Her eyes were shut and she was breathing slowly. She was very tired because she haven't found blood in the past 3 days and she was growing weak. Suddenly a strange man walks by pass her and stops right in front of her. He was a tall, not that old man, dirty blonde hair and aquamarine eyes. She woke up and with a gasp but, he calmed her. She started to shake uncontrollably.
I'll keep on. ..theres more to it but I have no time. . . I'll continue it
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Post by Kitten Kat on Sept 26, 2006 17:17:17 GMT -5
OMG CLIFFHANGER YOU MOTHERFAKER!!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS LAWLS!!!
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Post by Hades. on Oct 19, 2006 15:36:00 GMT -5
Chapter 2
Continued. . .
She was very cold and very thirsty, but thirsty of hunger. The seemingly "nice" gentlemen took the poor child by the hand and brought her to his house. He gave her food, shelter, cloth and other stuff she needed. On the age of 16, Darkness had to drop out of school because her "master" became very ill and his dear wife couldn't take care of him. SO darknes became a servant. He started to mistreat her even though she was the one who took care of him. She couldn't come out of the house and had to work all day on her neverending chores. She didn't even have 5 minutes to sleep. She couldn't. So many chores and her drea that persued her she was a little innocent girl. Darkness spent day and night putting her back in everything she did and still, her "master", didn't have the slightest guilt or compassion to treat her well. Darkness couldn't handle it it anymore, but she became strong enough. . .until one day. She was getting out of the bathroom and passed the masters bedroom were she heard this wierd hysterical, manic laugh. It was like if if he was possesed. She got scared and stood their observing what he did.
Chapter 3
He was like making a pact with a very strange guy in a hood. He held a book in the air and as he observed him quietly frozen he took a knife and cut his wrist. Taking a feather pen with his own blood he began to write in the book. Darkness couldn't watch no more and she escaped from the house. She was wondering arund the streets one day and accidently she bumped with a very tall, handsome, blonde hair and zapphire eyes guy. He stopped at the sigh of her and stared blankly at her. Darkness, blushed, dropped her blakc rose and he picked it up "You have beautiful eyes" was the first thing that came to his mind and said. Darkness blushed madly and took the rose "what's your name oh, beautiful one?" Darkness looked at him as if she couldn;t move her mouth "I. . ." she got a flash for a second and got scared "I may not speak my name to wondererors" the handsome guy smiled friendly "My name is Mystery" Darkness blinked several times and looked at him dumbstrucked "Mystery? That is a beautiful name for a guy who looks as handsome as you do" Mystery blushed for a second and looked at her waiting for and answer "Darkness" she replied 'hmmm. . .Darkness' he said to himself "What a beautiful name for a girl so beautifuly shocking like you" she blushed madly and looked away "Your eyes have hypnotized me" Mystery said "Mister. . .you're making blush" "I wondered. . .because when you wonder with your eyes makes you look dashingly beautiful" Darkness blushed again amd grinned to herself. She looked like the kind of girl everybody would like, that everyman would desire but she is as innocent as a rose but with thorns. When she has to defende herself she does and very well. Her eyes suddenly turned vrystla blue and she looked down. Mystery noticed it "My! Your eyes change. . .that makes you exceptionally beautiful" She didn't look at him and went away "I. . .have to go" and she rushed and disappeared in the croud.
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Post by Kitten Kat on Oct 19, 2006 16:27:59 GMT -5
all together now.....*crowd appears* AAAAWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! XP love ya lilly!
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Post by Hades. on Oct 19, 2006 16:53:03 GMT -5
Thanks!! Love ya too. I'll post some more later.
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Post by Hades. on Nov 2, 2006 19:04:12 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Chapter 4[/glow]
Mystery kept walking and dissapeared in the darkness. The next day came and it was very dark. Darkness wasn't in a very good mood. She was in the corner of the tallest sky scraper next to a gargoyle. Her eyes were glowing a very deep blue. She was looking down the street. It was deserted. She wasn't normal. Her eyes turned a very deep glowing shade of red and her hair whad a different shape and it turned dark blue. SHe had her fangs glistening in the light and she started snickering to herself. Suddenly she heard footsteps behind her and she turned around to see Mystery “Are you chasing me?” Darkness asked a little angry “No, can’t a guy observe a beautiful creature?” he said grinning and studying her “Oh, so you’re stalking me?” She said very sarcastically and Mystery looked surprised “As a creature as beautiful as you. . .I would stalk you everyday. . .” She looked at him strangely and suddenly another shadow appeared right behind her. HE was very tall, pale, black hair, red eyes and in a very good shape “why are you wondering in horror corners, Dark?” the tall figure said without taking his eyes off Mystery <He’s stalking me. . .GET HIM OFF MY FACE!!> <No prob> “Have we met before?” said Mystery, his eyes were smoking red with fury "I believe not, but I suggest you get wawy from her" Mystery gave m=him a nasty glare "She's your girlfriend or something?" "I think my business wouldn't matter to a stranger". . .
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Post by Hades. on Mar 29, 2007 14:47:59 GMT -5
Chapter 4 continued....
"I'm just asking you to go please." He said very coldly. "Very well then." Without any word he went away and gave a last glare to Darkness and then over to the dark figure. "Thanks." Darkness stood up and hugged the tall, dark figure. "Anything for my sister." "I'm glad your back." Darkness saidn in the tall figures arms. "Well...everytime I get back I find you in trouble. Perhaps you have a magnet for trouble? So, I can't risk you like this. You're the only thing I have and I always find you in trouble. Next time, you're coming with me." He said protectively and she smiled. "Thanks Shadow..."
Chapter 5
Shadow. That's the name of her brother. He stood in the dark only with his red eyes and fangs glaring in the light. "Well.... your boyfriend is waiting for you under the tree." She looked at him kind of like squinting her eyes and it took her just a minute to smile again. "Where are you going?" Darkness asked as he smiled. "I got a date with some nasty warlocks on the corner bar." She smiled. "Have fun!" "I..." He turned around and saw that Darkness wasn't there, "will." Darkness appeared moments later hanging upside down from the tree. "Hi!" The handsome guy sitting there looked at her and gave a little scream. "Were have you been?" She got down from the tree and another voice responded, "In trouble... as usual." It was Shadow and he was limping and having trouble to walk. "What?..." "Did the warlock bit you, Shadow?" Darkness said giggling. "NO....yes." Shadow said looking at his feet in pain.Darkness went over to Shadow and put her hand on top of the wound not touching it. A crystal like light appeared and healed the wound. "And a great healer my sis." "Yeah... I love her." Said Darkness' boyfriend. "Yeah... I love you too." She said slightly smiling. "Better?" Said Darkness to Shadow. "Yeah...thanks." He kissed her in the cheek. Darkness sat down by her boyfriend's side and suddenly, her eyes flashed yellow and she started sniffing around. Shadow looked at her, "You feel it too?" She nodded and started running around. She jumped and flied to the top of the building and looked around. Shadow's eyes turned yellow and he stood up and followed Darkness. He got where Darkness was stading and glanced at her. She saw a little boy in a corner of a dead end. Her eyes went back to green and she looked surprised. "No..." "What's wrong, Dark?" "It's too late!" "What is too late?" Shadow took a glance down at the dead end ad saw a boy. Not any normal boy. The boy was bitten in the side of the neck. Shadow reckognize the marks and looked over at his sister whom had her hand on her mouth. The boy's eyes flashed with fury. Darkness spotted the other bite mark on his neck. "Not..." "Another one." Shadow finished. "I thought you were the only powerful hybrid that was left here..."
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Post by Rumasai on Apr 18, 2007 9:58:45 GMT -5
This is good. Keep it up, I want more.
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Post by Hades. on Apr 18, 2007 17:06:01 GMT -5
Really? Thanks! I'll post more when I finish chapter 6 and seven so I can put it all together.
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Post by Hades. on Apr 19, 2007 17:53:52 GMT -5
Chapter 6...
"Well...it seems somebody else hates me enough to foll around and make another one. Perhaps the person desires a challenge?" Shadow said. Darkness' blinded eyes shifted towards Shadow, "What are you implying? Don't be a fool, brother! I know that being in war has gone to your empty, minded head but not a situtation as bad as this! Maybe we can make him part or us, perhaps?" Shadow gave Darkness a look that only she understood well. "Don't speak nonsense! War is what I was born for! Don't be fool." Darkness was surprised by his language for she had never heard her brother speak in such confidence. "Make that thing one of us? It's too late, Dark. He probably will be dead by now!" Shadow glanced at Darkness and for his surprise, she wasn't there. Darkness landed roughly on the could, hard ground right next to the boy. To her surprise, it revealed to be a nice young boy about her age. His hair was a midnight blue, almost black and his eyes were two beautiful zapphire color eyes like crystals glowing in the sight of the light. Darkness slowly approached the body and got closer.
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Post by Hades. on Apr 19, 2007 19:25:28 GMT -5
Orville...I owe you this and here it is! Aqui esta to cuento! Lol...
Chapter 7
Darkness took a peek to see if he was breathing and then she saw it. She gasped ash she heard a movement behind her revealing to be her brother.
"Is it alive?"
"Why are you calling him it? He's your same species."
"Dark, is that..."
"I see you noticed it as well. Indeed, brother. Just for now... let's not get our hopes up." Darkness fragile hand took the young man's hand and felt it for a pulse. He had normal pulse and as Darkness let go, she let out a silent and gentle sigh. As she stood up, the young man opened his eyes in a flash. He gasped madly and started to squirm around panting in pain. "Take it easy man!" Shadow said. That only just upset him for he started screaching in agony on the ground. "Easy there dude." Darkness gentle voice was heard and as she slightly put her hand on him, the young man was silent and suprisingly calmed.
"Dark, I don't know how do you do it, but you're just amazing." A third voice was heard. "Who are you? Your touch... So familiar. Your voice, so soothing and gentle and your smile; so beautiful and innocent yet so provocative. You must be an angel fallen from the sky." The young man's words were touching for Darkness and brought to her face a bright, but vague smile. "I think you're mistaken. My name is totally the opposite of an angel and so am I. You see, you apparently were bitten by two powerful creatures. My kind and the bad kind."
"Two...powerful...creatures? What are you talking about? Have you gone mad?!" Apparently, Shadow had no patience. "Watch how you're talking to my sister you half breed!"
"May I remind you that you both are pwerful hybrids and that you can destroy anything in sight? But that's not the point, isn't it?" Darkness calmed voice referred to SHadow as she turned around and looked straightly towards the young man.
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Post by Rumasai on Apr 20, 2007 9:46:30 GMT -5
I wanna know where it all leads.
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Post by Hades. on Apr 20, 2007 17:08:29 GMT -5
Hey! That was what I was going for next!
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