Post by Rumasai on Mar 27, 2009 3:09:14 GMT -5
Okay, you may say its like anything I've ever tried to write, but STFU!! lol, jk. I'm actually gonna follow this one through, this is an introductory to a new story I'm starting to write. Let me know what you think, thanks!
Before reading, keep in mind to please cut me a little slack, as I haven't written in a long, long time. This story is a work of fiction and any relations to any person or place is completely coincidental. That being said, hopefully you enjoy my first work in a long time.
(The two character profiles I've thrown into here may be the only two in the story. Let me know if its a good or bad idea, and how I'm doing at them so that I know whether or not to keep on doing these.)
May 11, 2007
~Character profile: Rumasai~
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White
Appearance: Rumasai wears all black all of the time, with the exception of the white undershirt he wears underneath the turncoat. Aside from that, he wears black pants, a right cutoff glove, and a pair of boots. He has black hair, a little beneath eye length, and very dark eyes.
Attitude: Rumasai seems like a lazy and very sarcastic person, but knows when its time to get serious.--
It was a sunny afternoon with a nice breeze. The clock had just struck 3:00 PM, and it seemed as if it was any other day. The streets were busy is the big city, it was normally a lively place.
Rumasai rolled over in bed and looked at his alarm clock for the third time today. "Man, its already 3... I guess I should be getting up. I promised Marla I would see her today, after all." he murmured and slowly stood up. He stretched his arms as he yawned, and thought to himself <Ehh, just another day. We'll see what today has in store for me...> Rumasai threw on a black turncoat, fixed his untidy hair, put a pair of boots on, and walked out the door, headed for Marla's place. He knocked on her door, and awaited an answer.
~Character profile: Marla~
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Half white, half Hispanic.
Appearance: Marla wears a small purple shirt with very short sleeves, a pair of tight jeans, and converse shoes most of the time. She has long brown hair that reaches about midway down to her back, and keeps it neat on a constant basis. Marla has bright blue eyes.
Attitude: Though relaxed most of the time, Marla can be very moody some days.--
"Come on in, hun." Marla said as she opened the door inviting Rumasai in.
Rumasai shrugged, walked in and muttered, "I wish you wouldn't call me that sometimes..."
They both sat down on the nearest couch in the clean house in silence for a few moments. "So, what do you want to do?" Marla asked Rumasai.
"I'm not entirely sure, lets go for a walk. It could be easier for us to find something to do here in Medux." he replied, getting up from his seat, helping Marla up, and heading out the door.
Before reading, keep in mind to please cut me a little slack, as I haven't written in a long, long time. This story is a work of fiction and any relations to any person or place is completely coincidental. That being said, hopefully you enjoy my first work in a long time.
(The two character profiles I've thrown into here may be the only two in the story. Let me know if its a good or bad idea, and how I'm doing at them so that I know whether or not to keep on doing these.)
May 11, 2007
~Character profile: Rumasai~
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White
Appearance: Rumasai wears all black all of the time, with the exception of the white undershirt he wears underneath the turncoat. Aside from that, he wears black pants, a right cutoff glove, and a pair of boots. He has black hair, a little beneath eye length, and very dark eyes.
Attitude: Rumasai seems like a lazy and very sarcastic person, but knows when its time to get serious.--
It was a sunny afternoon with a nice breeze. The clock had just struck 3:00 PM, and it seemed as if it was any other day. The streets were busy is the big city, it was normally a lively place.
Rumasai rolled over in bed and looked at his alarm clock for the third time today. "Man, its already 3... I guess I should be getting up. I promised Marla I would see her today, after all." he murmured and slowly stood up. He stretched his arms as he yawned, and thought to himself <Ehh, just another day. We'll see what today has in store for me...> Rumasai threw on a black turncoat, fixed his untidy hair, put a pair of boots on, and walked out the door, headed for Marla's place. He knocked on her door, and awaited an answer.
~Character profile: Marla~
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Half white, half Hispanic.
Appearance: Marla wears a small purple shirt with very short sleeves, a pair of tight jeans, and converse shoes most of the time. She has long brown hair that reaches about midway down to her back, and keeps it neat on a constant basis. Marla has bright blue eyes.
Attitude: Though relaxed most of the time, Marla can be very moody some days.--
"Come on in, hun." Marla said as she opened the door inviting Rumasai in.
Rumasai shrugged, walked in and muttered, "I wish you wouldn't call me that sometimes..."
They both sat down on the nearest couch in the clean house in silence for a few moments. "So, what do you want to do?" Marla asked Rumasai.
"I'm not entirely sure, lets go for a walk. It could be easier for us to find something to do here in Medux." he replied, getting up from his seat, helping Marla up, and heading out the door.