Post by Jeiku on Sept 23, 2010 15:52:50 GMT -5
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This site right here
God awful. Just trying to sound literate by using big elaborate words and yet not making any god damn sense. This is all just..
From the site's header
Fuck you, you're being redundant here and that's redundant, fuck you (see what I did there? shit yeah)
Who the fuck are "they" and why are they in the middle of nowhere?
LAND HAND. LAAAAAND HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND. IT'S A LAND WITH A HAND. LAND HAND. also suddenly a goddess and her brother
Your syntax and grammar are shit. WATER DOES NOT WORK THIS WAY
"different little named places"? You mean cities right? or towns? You use all these big words but you can't think of a word for these "different little named places"? Holy shit I'm having a brain aneurysm! agjhtrswkyjeut
This is not proper Latin at all. "Noctem" loosely translates as "By night" and "Sanctuarium isn't even a word..good job. You don't just add "-em" and "-ium" to a word and call it a day you uneducated chucklefucks. Nocturne is generally meant as a soft dreamy piece of piano music so I don't know what the hell you were doing there. I'll replace it with the word "Dark". Call yourself the "Atrum Templum" See? I helped ya! ;D
THEY BUILT THIS PLACE ON TOP OF A GRAVEYARD? OH MY GOD THAT'S AWFUL. THOSE GUYS FELL AND GAVE THEIR LIVES FOR THE GODDESS WHAT AN UNGRATEFUL BITCH
I don't know why I'm wasting my time with this, I doubt this will even be read by more than one or two people and I can guarantee it won't be read by a member living outside this state. You'll just skip on over to the spam section.
This site right here
God awful. Just trying to sound literate by using big elaborate words and yet not making any god damn sense. This is all just..
From the site's header
In the beginning, Noctem Sanctuarium had been a vast piece of empty land, withered, dry and fractured. No plant life filled the grounds due to lack of water vitally reviving any kind of life in it, even in the soil.
Fuck you, you're being redundant here and that's redundant, fuck you (see what I did there? shit yeah)
Many years later, the land had served for the fallen from a battle field; it was their sanctum, their requiem, their graveyard. Once they had fallen here, here they remained, dying due to the lack of essential survival items to replenish their systems to help them keep going.
Who the fuck are "they" and why are they in the middle of nowhere?
Eventually, the land hand been found by a goddess and her brother.
LAND HAND. LAAAAAND HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND. IT'S A LAND WITH A HAND. LAND HAND. also suddenly a goddess and her brother
Water was granted to give vegetation and provide the land with purified air.
Your syntax and grammar are shit. WATER DOES NOT WORK THIS WAY
Buildings, places, castles and warm welcoming streets were placed conveniently and separated by different little named places
"different little named places"? You mean cities right? or towns? You use all these big words but you can't think of a word for these "different little named places"? Holy shit I'm having a brain aneurysm! agjhtrswkyjeut
the harmonious masterpiece incorporated now as Noctem Sanctuarium, Latin for Nocturne Sanctuary.
This is not proper Latin at all. "Noctem" loosely translates as "By night" and "Sanctuarium isn't even a word..good job. You don't just add "-em" and "-ium" to a word and call it a day you uneducated chucklefucks. Nocturne is generally meant as a soft dreamy piece of piano music so I don't know what the hell you were doing there. I'll replace it with the word "Dark". Call yourself the "Atrum Templum" See? I helped ya! ;D
The name was in memory of the once serving graveyard for the fallen warriors that fought for the goddess' world to keep her safe and sound.
THEY BUILT THIS PLACE ON TOP OF A GRAVEYARD? OH MY GOD THAT'S AWFUL. THOSE GUYS FELL AND GAVE THEIR LIVES FOR THE GODDESS WHAT AN UNGRATEFUL BITCH
I don't know why I'm wasting my time with this, I doubt this will even be read by more than one or two people and I can guarantee it won't be read by a member living outside this state. You'll just skip on over to the spam section.
This rant was about Dumb Farks, <spoiler>or was it?</spoiler>